Strokes so rhythmical
a touch so tender
Kisses so endearing
The blues in my funk
And rhythm in my thighs
A good-good moment
A sensual haiku
1st!!! let me mark my territory!!
ooohhhhhh girl dis na real wa o!! What motivated u to write this?Very nice!
@Tigeress - Yes you are first girlie!! Hmmm I wonder what motivated me too..lol!!lol!! @Funms - yep u're second! and thank u !!
@Non-Non - Thanx chica!!
i guess it was Mr Feel-good Juande ey, aftershock of goodgood.Go on girl
@Jayla - Hunh?Juande?FeelGood? Me no understand!!*confused face*
@Jayla - forgot to say thank you..lol!!
Nice poem, you have the haiku talent. It's not easy but you got it.
@Myne Whitman - Wow..thank you very much..when I made reference to the haiku it wasnt for the piece but in reference to the short moment..so for u to say I actually got the haiku skill m humbled!!wow..then that's my first ever haiku..wow!! *forgive me i'm getting a lil carried away here..lol*
The blues in my funk??? is that what they call it now? lol. Nice sha
You bad bad girl...dont make me go sinning oh...hehehhe...did someone mention thighs?? sensual.
Beautiful poem..im tempted to ask whats the inspiration behind it?
have you seen the nude photos of "Willie" from Day 26? All I can say is LAWD!Anything sensual is good.Me likes
@ Nice Anon - Ahem! (coughing) we have to talk sharpish!
@Chayoma - thank you very much!!@Sugarking- Lol!!actually its called Good-Good..lol!! Thank you King!@Afrobabe - Bad girl?who me?NEVER!!..LOL..Thank you i tried to make it sound sensual@Trybes - Thank u very much kind sir! Hmm the inspiration....i cant say..lol!
@Nice-Anon - Err no I didnt see Willie from Day 26 but i sure am going to google straight away, i just read how he said that he keeps the fire burning with wife...hmmm m assuming brotha man is packing right?..lol!!Thank u girlie@Sugarking - care to share why u and Nice-Anon have to talk sharpish?..hmmm...u got ur own pics?..lol..ok lemme let it rest dont want to cause no scandals
lol. nah, i don't got no nude pics o! I plan to run for president some day u know? what'll happen if such pics found their way into the hands of the opposition? lolP.s Myself and Nice Anon are pallies of a high order. lol
LMAO @ Good-GoodgateA good comeback piece...Glad you updated without compromise either xxx
loli want to write a haiku sooni think it is a japanese poem of seventeen lines
Hmmm Shona, me likey. What happened to our date? I want further info on the inspiration behind this particular artistic endeavour.
Girrrrl when are you gonna publish a book with your work?
@Sugarking - Yep, it surely wouldnt be a good look if during your campaign some nude pictures hit the headlines..yep, keep it covered!!..lol! I see pallies of a high order, wow!Good for ya..lol@K - Girl you know I had to give a spin to it..loved the sound of Good-good gate!Hmm now that would be a great title for a book no? Thanks hon and yep, m baaack or am i?..LOL!!@Tisha - yeah that's the definition of a haiku..when I wrote this piece i didnt think of it as a haiku..but hey its turned out to be one. When I made the haiku reference in the piece as I said before it was to state the short length of time spent on 'good-good'..lol! Good luck with writing one, m sure you can do it!@Zimchic - Thanks darl! Our date, we are meant to go winter office wear shopping in Bicester as well as get some well-loved Starbucks right? Girl, lets do this sooner rather later coz m still up for it! Lawd knows my winter wardrobe from last year shrunk..yes it shrunk i didnt put on weight..lol!@MBLS - Thanks hon! and thanks for stopping by PS: I'm loving the Zim love up in this place!!@Haddash - (yes Zim love is reigning!!..lol) oops i digress, girl the book is coming out soon and u will be getting a signed copy!! Thanks shamwari xx
LMHO @ Good-Goodgate, latest scandals in town ay? Very original and a masterpiece. Shona, your write way too good for your own good (does that make sense?). Keep it up.So to sum it up this was a 5minute scandal right?the haiku and arietta references make me think so.PS: You are definitely keeping your lips tight about the inspiration behind this I see.LOL!
@MosDef - Thank you I guess!Hmm I write way too good for my own good?Okaaaay..it kinda makes sense..kinda!Wow - you're the first person who got it!!You get a star!!.lol!!The inspiration..can't a girl just write without inspiration, could be my imagination you know?..lol..yep I'm keeping quiet about it all!
This is me commenting :))
@Lolia - LOL!! And commented you have..now you shall forever be my friend!!
Its so nice, the poem and the thoughts
*hiss* I cant believe I was GOADED into commenting!
Hmmm... When I first read this there weren't so many comments. Oh well... Great piece Shona, and I say that without flattery. Like someone said, good comeback piece. Or rather, make it a good-good comeback piece... Commented!
@ttlolla - thank you very much hon!!@chari - buhaha *insert evil laugh*..why you hissing bro?!?were u under duress?i doubt it!..lol!!heey look @ the bright side, you will never ever be blocked!!LOL@NaughtyEyes - Why thank you dearest kind sir, coz that was sincere with no flattery @ all!And this commenting got you a lifeline and eternal friendship..LOL!!
beautifully written just as your beautiful self.
@Parakeet - Aww thank u boo!! Love u xxxx
okay i will accept 38th but not for long thanks for stopping by
I'm still waiting for my star Miss Shona since I was the only one who got it, and no m not a Vixenite! Care to change that?
@Misspumping - The number doesnt even matter..thanks for passing by too fellow club member ;)@MosDef - Your Star, I can't paste it here, so maybe for Xmas I'll buy you a star and name it MosDef ..lol..Snap I need to change that 'Vixenites', i think its @Charizard who moaned about it..let me change it forthwith!
@MosDef - Changes have been duly made your honor!
How will we ever solve the "Mystery of the Shrinking Wardrobe"- Nancy Drew should get on this case
@Zimchic - Ooooh how I loved Nancy Drews and Sweet Valley High books!! And yes we need to solve that mystery!!..LOL..Ndeipi shamwa??
Madam Shona Vixen, how are ya, babe? Off to look for you on Twitter...
@MamaBomboy - And find me you did..though my relationship with dear Twitter is souring..me not feeling it no more..LOL!! M great though, hope my boy Bomboy, TK and TE are all well xxx
Shona holla at ya boy, I need your help ASAP and this blog request is last resort as I cant get hold of ya on your cellphones,work phone,FB,twitter and telepathic!
*telepathically (before Miss Pedantic cusses me out for wrong spellings on her blog)
Very deep, sensual & passionate but does this verbal prowess transcend the boundaries of the paper'n pen & spill into where it matters most?
@MosDef - Pedantic?Me?N-E-V-E-R!!..lol..n glad i was able to help a friend! Next time I charge for my legal advice..LOL!!@ProfChiCaGo - thank you! Yes m sensual not only in words but in actions too..not that m tooting my own horn but toot toot!LOL
Very niiiceee. Seems like tis the season for blogsville folk. *wink wink*
@OriginaMgbeke - Thank you! Hmm its not the season for moi though
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